Just finished listening to Part 2 of Lord Dickens's (shouldn't it be Dickens' - I can't remember the rule) Declaration and am in awe at the world Larry has managed to create and flesh out in such a short time. Part 1 had me intrigued - I didn't know where the story was going, but the setting and characters, and, dare I say, the reading, were top notch. I also like all the little in-jokes or nods to characters in "our" timeline - although these are easy to miss while listening. I'll have to re-read this more slowly once Larry's done with the narration.
The second part just got its hooks into me - now I just wonder how this is going to be wrapped up. All the to-ings and fro-ings in time and the neat quantum-like explanation of how simply observing events can cause them to be subtly altered (or is it disaccommodated?) are reminiscent of the multiple drafts any story must go through and the feeling some authors must have that the story will never be done. Will this story reach a stable equilibrium in time - doesn;t this mean that the ability to travel through time must therefore be remeoved - as if it had never had been?
Whatever the conclusion, I can't wait. Roll on Part 3!
"Don't put your trust in revolutions. They always come around again. That's why they're called revolutions. People die, and nothing changes."
-- (Terry Pratchett, Night Watch)